We sat on the back step
with our umbrellas up
(me with the green umbrella;
you with the
blue and yellow giraffe umbrella).
We traded them back and forth every couple of minutes.
At first, the drops were slow and large
making polka-dots on the patio.
Then the rain came and went in waves of heaviness
“Do you hear it?” I asked. “It sounds like ocean waves.”
“Mmm-hmm,” you say.
“It makes lullabies on the roof.”
Rain dripped off your umbrella and landed on the lap of my
red dress.
We lasted out there for about 5 minutes
and giggled our way back inside.
(c) Susan Maclay
This is just beautiful. I love so many of these lines, especially "polka-dots on the patio" and the comparison of rain coming and going in waves to the sound of the ocean -- and the response! "Lullabies on the roof" Priceless!
ReplyDeleteOh, I loved it Susan! So perfect...lullabies on the roof.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful memory, Susan. I love that you put in the dialogue!
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